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Train station- Diashar by ~Velf:iconVelf:


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A great one from :icondiashar: This time indebted at the end of part 5.

...He nearly ran past her, she was sitting on her own at the front of the train, face hidden in her hands. She was crying. He stood there for a few seconds, and watched her weep as though her heart was breaking. He had no illusions as to who had caused those tears. He rapped on the window and she looked up. She blinked her watery eyes and focused on his face. She gasped when she recognised him.

“This isn't right, Gabriella!” he shouted through the window. “Get off this train right now!”

Fresh tears tumbled from her beautiful green eyes. She shook her head, shrinking away from the window.

“I’m sorry!” he shouted, and he really meant it. Please, just get off the train!” She shook her head again.

His hands trembled with frustration, but he would not let himself lose his temper. That was for later when she was not on a fast thing with wheels that was going to leave any second. He pressed his palms to the window.

Please don’t go,” he said. “I need you to stay.”

He looked at her, his expression begging her to listen.

“I love you,” he breathed.

Gabbie’s face fell, and she cried all the harder, tears dropping from her chin to make a small puddle on the wooden planks at her feet. She even had her shoes on the wrong feet, she had left in that much of a hurry.

“What have I done to her?” thought Edward. But there would be time to fix everything when she was back by his side again.

The guards whistle shrieked and Gabbie had not moved, but the train began to...
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~mewhaku:iconmewhaku: Apr 19, 2008, 5:47:19 PM
Really beautiful picture. ^_^ Along with such a sad part of the story... :+fav:

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They just don't understand how I feel in my heart,
They don't stop to listen, I feel so apart...
They just don't see things the way that I do!
I hope that someday I'll find someone who's true. ~ mewhaku
~Shadow-Dancer1456:iconShadow-Dancer1456: Apr 19, 2008, 6:55:51 PM
Beautiful Dai...you convey emotion so well.
~Velf:iconVelf: Apr 19, 2008, 10:46:43 PM
She is so good at it it's sickening! LOL. I feel so sorry for gabbie looking at this. Ed looks pissed ;-)
~Velf:iconVelf: Apr 19, 2008, 10:47:34 PM
It is yes, but thinks will be happy in indebted again... in a while ;-)
~tamar-shaki:icontamar-shaki: Apr 20, 2008, 1:12:01 AM
Pissed, mixed with a very raw sadness. :(

I still love this one! :heart:

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I admit: I have attempted Alchemy by clapping my hands and by drawing an array... unfortunately... all were failed attempts.
~Velf:iconVelf: Apr 20, 2008, 1:56:32 AM
Yeah, its a good mix of feeling on his face. I don't know how she does it!
~chimaera-angel:iconchimaera-angel: Apr 20, 2008, 2:52:14 AM
so sad.. and so beautiful!
~sherbetmayhem:iconsherbetmayhem: Apr 20, 2008, 6:49:08 AM
One of the best moments in the whol damned thing, and as usual she's captured it with perfection :D

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"No-one's gonna take me alive. The time has come to make things right. You and I must fight for our rights. You and I must fight to survive."

Muse, "Knights of Cydonia".
~summerjasmine:iconsummerjasmine: Apr 20, 2008, 6:59:58 AM
Simply amazing!

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"Be yourself. Don't take anyone's shit. And never let them take you alive!!" ~Gerard Way